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  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: my favorite book

    This is so simple, yet so gorgeous. Which is good. It's hard to stay in the middle. I think the simplicity is my favorite part. There's nothing complicated about the ...

    Nov 10, 2022

  • Other » General, General
    Re: Story of How I Met Him

    Hey there! :D Well, my first thought when seeing this was "What's wrong with Alex?" and then I started reading, and my thought stayed. Obviously, there's a lot happening with ...

    Feb 27, 2022

  • Hello there! ^^ The first thing that came to my mind when reading this was "is this a fairytale? The introduction points toward it," but I believe that's just the ...

    Feb 27, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Health
    Re: Void

    Hi there! ^^ So, the first thing I noticed is that the way your friend assigns a meaning to the words is quite interesting, as a lot of them seem ...

    Oct 28, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Mountain (4)

    Hi again! ^^ I see the 3rd part of this already has a nice review on it, so I believe anything I can say there has already been mentioned. I ...

    Apr 20, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Mountain (2)

    Hi again! ^^ I really like your starting line here. I believe I've read about how the lines keep getting chosen by your English tutor as you continue writing each ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Article / Essay » Fantasy, Dramatic
    Re: WIP Fantasy story- finding out Hazel is a vamp

    Hi there! ^^ My first thought it "who is this Hazel person?" when I first saw the title, which isn't the best reaction possible. When I started reading, I also ...

    Apr 17, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: The Mountain (1)

    Hi there! I'll be reviewing all of the parts to this, so expect to see more of me soon! ^^ I really like the idea of this! I'm not exactly ...

    Apr 17, 2021

  • Article / Essay » Literature, Culture
    Re: Highways

    Hi there! I've never reviewed before, so excuse any mistakes I might make! ^^ The first paragraph reminds me of Richard Siken , more specifically his poetry in the book ...

    Apr 17, 2021

Minds are like parachutes. They only function when they are open.
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