Zelithan

not true, it does not cover most orf the land.

These are the best poems i ever read. Brilliant. Perfect. I know little to nothing abuot poetry punctuation but i am relitively sure it is right.

Very good! And for the record, cousin, you had that title first!

Remember long is not nessiserily good writing.

I read it. It was fine but nothing speacal. Work espeahally hard on the next chapter. My interest is waneing.

the ocean (if i got it right it is too simple-i got it before i even finished reading it)

I love it! will you be my valentine-wait no youyr a girl!I wuold have to buy you stuff. :lol:

I like the purposeful capital h. The third chapter was good but not quete as great as the first two. I liked the way you ended it. Made me catch ...

Its certianly going along. :P

Chocolate is like love :D

It so good i though it was plagerism until i read "its velvety darkness" you shuold say velvet darkness.

Very good. Reminds me of my culture. i hope you interpret Max properly.

Keep it up, its getting better by the line. :D

Plot is picking up. i will read more. Its not like my writting anymore.

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