Zackymas

Hey there thanks for the review~ No, he's not the one bleeding. A few paragraphs above that I state he feels a liquid and describe it as blood (without actually ...

Thanks. This right here was just one of my daily random writing thingies ^-^; so yeah it's not developed :p

Thanks for your kind words :D I'm just not that good with sounds yet ^-^;

Well I just started a blog where I post my daily writing thingies (not enough time with college to make reviews to get points and post here XD) so if ...

Thanks :D

I'm in phone right now so I'm just going to address some things. 1st. If the story doesn't work because it's being 'told' (and in the larger context, it is) ...

Oh and by the way, this is a Robin Hood-esque, not a Robin Hood story. I never thought about doing it in Robin Hood times, but around the 1400s~ because ...

Oh and by the way, this is a Robin Hood-esque, not a Robin Hood story. I never thought about doing it in Robin Hood times, but around the 1400s~ because ...

Thanks there :D Oh sorry but this will be a nitpick with your correction. Both 'realise' and 'realize' are correct. They are different spellings of the same word that vary ...

Hey there and thanks for the extensive review :D I definitely wouldn't have noted how flawed this is on my own so thank you :) Regarding the gun, I was ...

Thank for your kind words ^-^ Also I notice you are new to the site, welcome and I hope you enjoy your stay here :D PD: I'm going to nitpick ...

Thanks for your kind words :)

Heyo there and thanks for the early review (if that makes sense~) :D Well yeah even as I wrote it there were some parts I felt didn't sit right (like ...

Better, but it still sound a little bit too... constructed. This is how I'd write (disclaimer: this is completely my vision and thoughts, you don't have to take it at ...

Thanks for such kind words :D