Yuriiko

nice! great descriptions!

Thank you, NYCnightowl007. I very interested already in making another chapter and I Hope Kyle must be doing his confession to Lila there already... :D

For your first poem it's really nice!! Keep it up. but as what they've said you need to work on some of your lines there.... :D

cute and romantic!! keep it up! loved it and congratulations for having this as a featured work!! :D

awwww... nice one! it's so.... it's kind of left hanging there... but it's cool! almost romantic!

nice! i loved it but as what they said.. capitalization and grammar.. there's kinda wrong to it.. but I really liked it! :D

i do agree on that... :elephant:

I really liked it! make more please!! but you know, I agree on most senior writers about your grammars... don't worry I am like that too! but we can change ...

funny! i can't help but laugh! whahahaah! loved the Bridge thing!

it's nice how you are being sweet and romantic to the poem.. :D

nice.. that's all I can say. :D

it's nice.. i'm from Philippines too. :D

thank you everyone for reading my story. I apologize for my grammars.. I'll try my best to see if I can edit it.. :D @lena.wooldridge- thank you for your comments ...

thank you bmat and Quetseli!! :D it's not a sad ending though.... :D

all i can say is that it's awesome! :D is that true?