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Hey
I liked it. It's different.
Charlotte Grace
Please write more.. It's well written and easy to read. The characters are interesting and unique well worth pursuing.
Please pm me when u write more.
Continue to work on this and never give up on a story that obviously has taken you so much time and imagination.
The plot is interesting and hopefully the ending won't be predictable like that they end up being together.
Good luck
Kaka x
Wow! i loved it! :3 Cant wait till the next chapter!
i loved that best guy/girl friend relationship. Keep on writing!
~Book Person~
Hey,
I was looking at the comment you left me and decided I will have a look at you story. I'm glad I did. It was really good. It is not something I would usually read, but I am glad I did. Keep up the writing.
Thank you, NYCnightowl007. I very interested already in making another chapter and I Hope Kyle must be doing his confession to Lila there already...
Hey there. First off, I must say that I really liked this. I couldn't stop reading. Your writing has a really good flow to it and it's easy to read. The only thing I had a problem with was that until I was getting towards the end, I realized that they weren't going out. Maybe if you added that in it would be a touch less confusing. Other than that, I loved it! :)
Keep writing,
Chrissie