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Hello there! Here to you-know-it. The match was almost over and for some reason , Adam was just stood o n the same spot, true enough the score probably wouldn't ...

Hello there! Here to review. It had roughly the same form as a human, with elongated limbs that were bone thin and knees that were bent the wrong way, like ...

Hello there! First of all, Welcome to YWS! This poem's good, very well-written. :D Just one thing: A nauseating , sickening feeling overtook me. You misspelled something right there. :wink: ...

Hello there! First off, proofread this. You can't expect a reader to read a story that's full of grammatical errors, bad punctuations, misspellings, capitalization, etc., even if you say this ...

Hello there, JJ! Here to review. I, I was an outcast. Not a good starting line... well, a bit okay. No one wanted me, no one cared. It was because ...

Hello there, JJ! Here to review. :wink: For some strange reason, I could not control or even read her mind. She must have known I way trying, for otherwise she ...

hello there! Here to review. :wink: A LITTLE LIE. CHAPTER ONE. Some people ask me , "Do you think you'll be together forever?" I mean really people. That’s like me ...

Hello there, Cindy! Here to you-know-it. Comments, suggestions, corrections are in RED . James POV When I turned twenty, I promised my parents I would go back home, after living ...

Hello there! Okay, I agree with Snoink. This piece is short but cute, not romantically well written. There seemed to be no development of the characters in there and I ...

Hello there! I'm sorry this took me days to review it. I wish I had read this earlier. First off, I like the way you started and ended the story. ...

Hello there! for 11 years, Try placing 'eleven' instead of numbers, in that way, it'll look poetic and proper to read. an d who I'm not, Dear Friends, you use ...

Hello there! There’s a bur n ing pain inside me, a sense that a love has gone, why did you have to go? for you have done no wrong. I ...

Hello there! Here to review as requested by Cap'n Classy. :wink: It made a piercing sound that sent a shiver down her spine, although rhythmically pounding like the beat of ...

Hello there, Kaedee! Here to you-know-it. :wink: Ka-dumb. Ka-dumb. Is this the sound the heart makes when it beats? Seriously, this quite confused me but I think it's the heart ...

Hello there! Here to review. “Brooklyn , could you please get up ? W e ' re going to be late for the cinemas, the boys are only going to ...