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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Death Scene

    Hey Judging from what is displayed in this work, you clearly have a major serial killer obsession. which is cool I guess. Since this is a review, I won't be ...

    Feb 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Exiled

    I think you should keep going with this! XDDDD You haven't written that much here, I was expecting a novel, however, you have made a solid start. I would recommend ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Are You There?

    Yes i am there. XDDDD Ok. So this work is very depressing. However, I admire the formatting of the final stanza because it is really intelligently constructured. You convey your ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Inspire Me

    Ok. I am writing something in this white and bland space. In the hope of entertaining you. Why did the chicken cross the road? - He didn't! Ba boom. XDDDD ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Guess What!

    I think this work is really dark. You reference Satan and hell and stuff and that's quite disturbing. You write well and this is interesting to read. I think your ...

    Feb 4, 2014
  • Other » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Running Out of Titles

    Ok. I won't comment on the formatting. Ha ha. I really like this. You have a funny writing style. It's enjoyable to read. And most importantly, you made me laugh. ...

    Feb 4, 2014


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