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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Chapter 6 - Gaining Perspective

    I miss her. I need her. I worry about her. I want to protect her. I "Have"Fix That

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Last Waltz

    This is great because like they i was at piano-forte in my life, in transitions from a quaint Texas town spending weekends touring Guadalajara from night club to the embrace ...

    Aug 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Again

    i LOVE IT it sounds like me a lilte ;) anyways [quote][My walls are building themselves back up, Again No one can hear my screams, Again. Alone and helpless, Again./quote] ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: deleted

    Your heart may be pure stone But I am made of flesh and bone And you may feel like You own the world But I'm just one girl In a ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Hardest Goodbye (Chapter One)

    was, to get her truck and stuff. She didn’t have that plane ticket like she said she did in the text message but she didn’t care. She needed her nothingness ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Cherry Code Chapter 4 - Going back in time

    It Was Very confusing at the beging but i got in to it if you know what im saying i love this part Astor," I begain,"Astor, my grandfather is Chief ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Art Murderers Ch 1 (Edit 4)

    I Love it my fave Part Is The Ending Of course, in his defense, Dexter enjoyed all forms of expression. But it was always the darker stuff that got him, ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Touch Of Stone: Chapter Four

    I LOVE IT SOO SOOO SOOO LOVELY I WANT TO CRY IT WAS SOO AMZING “I am so sorry dad,” Sabora whispered as she curled up on her dads lap. ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Homecoming for a Hero

    i Didnt Really Get It But i Got It At The Same time bit confused But i loved this part Everyone turns away. No one looks at the rain. Bombs ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pixie Dust

    You Had Great Grammar In This Posted I Really Injoyed This Part If the world is made of trust, What is this faith I have in you? I believe that ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Haze (Chapter Two)

    This Was Bit Coufuseing a lilite Messy BUT I LOVED IT!!!! you did GrrrrEAAAAT Love THIS PART!!!! Jacksin then had to wonder how good of a kamikaze pilot Blaze would ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Withered Roses

    This A Really GREAT!!! Poem You Did Great on this Part “I love you, too,” she answered just as another bullet was fired. This one pierced her skin and found ...

    Aug 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Beautiful Disaster

    I LOVED this Part Right Here It happens in a blink And then you think you can never go back You hear all the noises They're starting to come flying ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: You ( The inside of you

    SCARY MUCH right here But you know under the fake smile and the perfect eyes You cry inside Hiding you feelings bye lying being that POPULAR girl But on the ...

    Aug 17, 2011


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