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Re: Prologue: Broken
I think I will actually turn it into a novel. I have some ideas right now. You really think it will be good?
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: The Letters: Chapter One
Why did I end up with him for a older brother? use an for words that start with a vowel, a for words that start with a consonant. way to ...
Apr 14, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This is a really awesome poem. I love, love, love it!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
I love it!! Especially because I fell for it myself!! Good job!!
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Her Mask (Poetry Pairs Contest Entry)
I love it. There are times when I feel like the way the character did so I can relate to it. A job well done!
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Ballroom
This is a very beautiful poem. I really didn't find anything wrong with it but yeah, I understand what you mean. Good job!
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part - Chapter 2
Sure. I'll put it up! Thanks. :)
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Dear Mister
Well, this is an amusing poem. I guess, you've already improved on the mistakes you had before because I couldn't find anything wrong with it besides maybe the capitalization of ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: It's called a lie.
Hey! This is a very beautiful piece. I couldn't find any obvious mistakes so all I can say is keep up the good work!
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Despair.
This is a really good poem. The flow of rhythm is really good and I loved the way you used the words. Keep it up.
Mar 12, 2011