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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: The Killings of Nathaniel Rake. Chapter 1

    Read the message above this for the same info. A.k.a my reply to the first review. I ran this through Grammarly and did a terrible job of it. I Will ...

    Apr 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: The Killings of Nathaniel Rake. Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review! I wrote this story before, I got better at my writing skills. I Still Have a long way to go until I reach master level, but ...

    Apr 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: "Realm for 2" by the one and only Shirido keizo "'sekai!

    thanks! This is my old writing but I can do a lot better now thanks to people like you!

    Apr 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: "Realm for 2" by the one and only Shirido keizo "'sekai!

    This is the beginning draft of a story I have had sitting around for a while and just now actually started on!

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: "Realm for 2" by the one and only Shirido keizo "'sekai!

    For a little story or term knowledge okay, so A reflect is a mirror version of you who can move talk and everything a human can only Magicks have reflect's. ...

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: "Realm for 2" by the one and only Shirido keizo "'sekai!

    Regular's are the second-lowest on the respect line to most magicks the rose robed gaining first

    Jan 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Sorrow

    "I%u2019m broken and empty, just like a clock." what does this mean?

    Dec 10, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: On A Lonely Christmas Eve

    just published A Decree of Darkness!

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: mijn liefde

    sorry, the page glitched when I did this review.

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: mijn liefde

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    This is a great poem. You did a good job interpreting your dreams into poem form. I have a lot of dreams about romance and girls. Maybe this is because ...

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: On A Lonely Christmas Eve

    Well, I don't blame you. I haven't really been a very active person one here so I guess in a way I am kind of new. I am trying to ...

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: On A Lonely Christmas Eve

    I've actually been on here since early 2019, so I'm not too new.

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: On A Lonely Christmas Eve

    You mean welcome to the site?

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Short Story » Horror, Romantic Re: On A Lonely Christmas Eve

    Why do you have to make such a great story with absolutely no errors? I can get any publish point if I don't anything to say. So I will say ...

    Dec 8, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Dear Universe,

    This is a very deep poem. You did really well to get your emotions across. I could feel them.

    Jan 23, 2020


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman