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hey doll! (lol u use tht all the timeXD) any way i love the feeling these lyrics give off im wondering......(you dont have to tell me on your post) but ...

i like it, a lot actually! i love how the main character is talking to the "audience". also how its very suspenseful! the only thing i think you should fix ...

i am surprised that this peom is your first! you had put so much emotion into this piece. yet i am confused. i get the topic, though with each stanza, ...

i really like this! the only things wrong are some grammar/spelling errors. other than that i really enjoyed reading this. you put a lot of emotion into it. Keep writing! ...

Hey, Mo! ok i just have to say i LOVE this peom! the theme is used a lot, yet the way you described it made me keep on reading. :D ...

i really really love this!!!! just to show my first wasnt the best but oh well XD also theres one thing......tghe very ending...... the speaker says "i am dead" this ...

teehee i know who this is about!!!!! :D lol but anyway i love it! i know you dont like it that much, but i love it! its beautiful!!! a wonderful ...

over all i love the concept and the poem itself. it has a powerful image and has powerful emotion. one thing i would work on are these lines; A whispered ...

very beautiful! i love how it was full of emotion AND it flowed well. i also have to agree with you. i like how it is. i don't think you ...

yay!!! i like it M.L!!! (oh btw gimme a nickname for u so i know wat to call you and youll know its me) anyway the only thing i think ...

No offense to Juniper, but i disagree completely on the last part. Don't listen to the last bit, Rae. Love is infinity. Never can the topic love be so common ...

Wow. This is very emotional. I love how you kept on having the little boy relate to his father, for that's what many young boys do. Alltogether very well written. ...