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I would like to point out that the lack of contractions with two of the character's speech is a trait of the race that they are within the Elder Scrolls ...

Actually there are some small hints as to what the narrator is. It's a guardian angel. You really see that in one of the last paragraphs. "When the world seems ...

You are correct. This is, in fact, my first attempt at writing a short story. I am getting out of that habit of large paragraphs and spacing things out more ...

I am a believer in Christ as well. I know.what you mean by parables. XD. Thank you for you're review.

Don't you dare blame me for the submissions I gave you. You said you were out of stuff to review and bored. I made sure that you won't have that ...

Thank you for your review. I attempted to add more to the fire section and there is more in description that I should really put on this. The thing is ...

If you will remember, Karliah calls him a he'll cat in the first section of this chapter. That is the signal. As far as the stud thing. Usually it is ...

Hmm...I hadn't thought about if he has had them before. Good point to bring up. I may have some changes to this in the future.

I would only like to address one thing about your review. The potion that he was given does not heal him. He still has the effects of sleep deprevations, muscle ...

Greetings and thank you for your reviews. I am sorry that I have not gotten back to the others. But I would like to point out a few things here. ...

Thank you for your review. I would like to say that Do'alba is in fact a Khajiit, which was supposed to be determined from the description of having fur. The ...

To be honest....I don't like the details rape scene myself either. I was given the idea of seeing Vajrasha's point of view in this and, unfortunately, it meant going into ...

I really thank you for your reviews and I actually have a few things in mind for this. I could, in fact, switch perspectives for a shot while and give ...

This takes place 50 years after the events of Skyrim. Currently the characters are in Valenwood, the High Elf home lands.

Thank you again for your reviews. Be sure to check back. Most of your suggestions I place into the story to fill it out.