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This was a rather heart touching story about the true value of life. Not in the amount of money that you acquire through a lifetime; but, in the lives you ...

I have to say that you got me. It was truly masterful how you threw the audience off with the head of lettuce. Using it to distract from the anticipation ...

I have to say that you are are very well on your way to writing your own book. I don't know if the is the beginning of your story, but ...

I must say that you have written this very well. I like that you have left the actual end of the world as a mystery. What exactly was it that ...

This sounds like a game that I would play! I always love swordplay myself. You have any extra tickets lying around? But to my review. I thought that this was ...

This is a truly awe inspiring piece of work. The way that you capture a young child's innocence is truly gifted writing. You bring to question what it is that ...

I am going to be completely honest here. This story is not well written. The run on sentences alone make the story seem to drag on. There are entire paragraphs ...

The dynamic that you have created here between life and death is really inspired. The concept of life and death trading colors and darks is rather interesting to say the ...

This is an amazing story. The theme of it is one that needs to be present in our everyday lives. With our microwave society, as it is today, having things ...

I have to say that I am not sure if you are trying to create a continuous loop of events or if this is like a premonition. Who is the ...

This is an amazing take on the constant war of life and death. Given the choice to experience life or surrender to death has been a topic that philosophers have ...

This is a intriguing story that brings to light the process of knowing someone so well that their apparent death is seen as out of character for them. You did ...

This is an interesting idea. Is Faulkner a demon who the depths of her mind summoned to do what she can't? Or is he merely a delusion of psychosis that ...

This is an insightful piece on the inner most anxiety of trying to let someone go, whether they are family or friend. It expresses fear and uncertainty of the moment ...

You have a very good set up for this story. The idea of another Earth with a inhuman character, though it has been done several times, is something that never ...