Xunnamius

Sorry, but I couldn't help but laugh a little... It was supposed to be funny in a few ways, so yay :lol:. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for reviewing! Once again, I love the nitpicks. Now, up until the second "again", it's fine. You capitalised "she" correctly, because "she tried again" is a new sentence. However, ...

Wow. That was quick! Thanks for the reviews, everyone. I love the nitpicks the most :lol: The thing I see myself doing wrong with this one (I can see it ...

OH NO!! Was my reaction. I cannot wait to read the sequel. Is it the ending? Are you making a trilogy? Because I'm going to have to read the entire ...

I see your point there, I'll make those edits when I get back. Thanks!

Short, sweet, and to the point. I like your style. To stand up and defend/protect/console the person who is most dearest to you... great work for such a small space, ...

I agree with Cnvalambrosia on this one, that was pretty damn amazing. I haven't felt such an emotion from the internet in a long time. Keep it up :D

That's what everyone calls meh :P I'm glad you enjoyed it :D I'll try and work on my use of description to make it a bit shorter! Talus is one ...