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Okay, nevermind, I fixed it.

First off-Why is this in the Vex folder when I put it in my Poetry folder??? Second-I don't usually like poetry, but I've seen some pretty cool poetry lately on ...

No problem! Thank you for taking the time to post this to YWS!

She is not actually a stalker, Archer is just an idiot and totally over-exaggerates. By the way, there is a reason I call it "Perplex" Trilogy (it's on the folder ...

Also, I realized that I DID bring up how she knew his name in chapter 2, or at least, her 'excuse' for knowing his name.

I was wondering, is it okay to switch perspectives after you skip time frames? I just realized A LOT of my book is written in past-tense but some of it ...

Thanks for all the support, you guys!!!

Thanks! I will be posting more soon!

Thank you!!!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I am trying to go back and fix some of my skipping to past and presence, I do that a ...

No, you weren't too harsh at all! Actually, I love criticism, because it makes my writing better. I think I'll go back and fix some of the mistakes you brought ...

I'd love to see this turn into an actual book. It would probably be one of the best books in the history of all literature...

I think I fixed some of it, but I think I might need to edit a little bit more.

Thanks for the criticism, it's actually very useful. It's a habit of mine to change tenses, and I'll go back and fix that eventually. I'll also fix that statement I ...

I was writing it before I discovered this site, and it's a lot easier to just continue typing it on there and then copy over.