Wulie

eep, ok sorry very different schools! I hate that we all have to a certain type of person and if we don't fit that catogery then we're hated!

-yay- does that mean it was ok??? I shall try change the first two line *thinks* any one got any suggestions? No time left for prayers No one will answer ...

Eep, darn school hey you never know may help you!

Really love this wonderful imagery wonderful words however I agree with niteowl about the title I though 'oh no its going to be boring' I'm not really sure what you ...

I understood it though I may have got it wrong - and I did really like it... I'm no good at saying what to change on your poems, sorry. Wu

I really didn't let this it was boring and repetative it has nothing to it, there was not a line the would catch my attention sorry. It just seemed as ...

Yeah i'm with you on that one, I jsut thought I'd give a different style a go 'cause every one says I do the same kind of style and its ...

To be fair i loved it and for your age it is quite amazing how you write I admire you. You have so much potentioal ( sorry can't spell today) ...

I love it :)!

Hm not to sure if this is a complitment of not but thanks for the comments... I've never really done a long poem or in structure that I have here ...

I know , I know I wasn't picking an arguement just stating my point :)! I do uderstand your point but in the end all the cancer charity wants is ...

lol some times it is good to go with the crowd in this case - lol I suppose thats why they make them, man they'll make alot of money soon. ...

I don't wear the bands because of fashion or whatever - I do strongly support each group which I mentioned however there's so many aids/groups it seems unfair to give ...

Pretty darn good :)!I'm poo at textiles! wu x

I really enjoyed reading this poem I know exactly how you feel in this poem. Wu x