WritinginRome

ahh, I definitely got the feeling English was not your first language. Do you write directly in English or translate? I love that name

teachers are not always right! But when they are marking you work its best to do as they say of course

I mean personally I don't find the idea of two men kissing sexy, but im a bi female so hey... However I truly believe that media such as this will ...

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Aww this is lovely and thought provoking Bravo

perfect, all making a little more sense now.

If it works for you then keep it, but it was the one piece of imagery which stuck out for me as not really working. Doesn't mean everyone else will ...

I'm on it :) just posted chapter 2

again though, for time limited piece you've done a hell of a lot better than most people could have. and for a piece about vampires, its very original. They're not ...

Hiya This is rather impressive for something written in such a short time, although I must say your time limit was definitely noticeable. If you are interested in turning this ...

This is a good idea for a story definitely, but I found it very hard to read, you have a LOT of simple spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in here ...

awesome, I'm 10 chapters in so I'll install one chapter every couple of days. Do you have any work you'd like to be reviewed? :)

thankyou very much! I just wanted to check, at the moment can you only view the prologue or all 3 chapters, I edited it to remove the second 2 chapters ...

I suppose not no! Do we learn a little more about their relationship and the rest of the family? With one interaction we cannot learn too much. BTW would love ...

That's really awkward I had two tabs on and thought you were asking for mine if you could read it, my bad. I am not author!!!