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Thanks

Thank you for the reveiw this was acutually an idea I had for a longer story, but deecided to make it shorter I'm still considering to make another wersion of ...

Thanks for the comments

This was really good. I love how it ryhmed, and even though was a poem it still told a story. i give it 5 stars.

Whoa!!!!! This was amazing I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really sad though :(