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Hello, Heaven Sent! ^_^ I liked this bit; it carried the action well and I liked the slow, patient pace. There were a lot of awkward sentences that I noticed ...

Mmm, very interesting. I like your writing style - very simple, yet beautiful. You have an excellent start; it just needs a bit of polishing. :wink: Some suggestions: Danica Holden ...

Hello there, Achitaka! Seeing you have no comments yet, I thought I would stop by. This is a decent beginning in the sense that you have specific direction in which ...

SPELLING! *attacks* Please spell correctly. As the grammatical things have already been covered, I will give you some tips on the overall story. :wink: While this was a decent start, ...

Hmmmm, interesting beginning. I echo a lot of Claudette's comments, as usual. :wink: I apologize in advance if I am being harsh, because I really don't like this kind of ...

I have a feeling that a good chunk of this is not to be taken literally, but I am not sure. It was a little strange, how the narrative went ...

Ooooh, I liked this very much. Your characterization of Jacques Ambler (I presume that is the main character's name) was excellent and it immediately hooked me. Excellent description over all. ...

Wel, I have not read the previous parts, but after this, I want to. You have some excellent dialogue here and it seems like a good start. The one suggestion ...

You're off to a good start, Night Mistress! You have begun to introduce us to Rosaline and her family, begun to develop her and allowed her to speak for herself. ...

Hey there, Winie! Much better spelling here, hon. Thank you. :D There were still a few errors, but it wasn't as bad. Here's what I'll do. I'm going to go ...

Hey there, FantasyArtist! Mmm, this was enjoyable to read. I like that it was told from the POV of a wolf and I like Elayna already. I have but a ...

Interesting. I still love your style - it's so beautiful and you have paid much attention to detail here, which makes me very happy. :wink: Laynox and Akkarn are coming ...

Hello there, Magyk! This was a joy to read. Your imagery of the storm sucked me in immediately which is exactly what it should do, and I loved how you ...

Hey Night Mistress! I saw some of your help topics around and decided to come take a look. First, I thought this should be rated R for sexual content (we ...

Ah, spelling! *flails* You're killing me here with your spelling errors. I don't mean to sound harsh, but no one is going to take you seriously if you don't spell ...