Writerchick

Wow that was certainly a very powerful piece. You dealt with quite a serious issue I'd say and i think you communicated both the youth and the extreme sadness of ...

I really enjoyed reading your piece and felt it was well described although at times a bit cliché. The first paragraph sets the atmosphere for the piece and I felt ...

Dude, you've really improved as a writer. I must commend you on how griping and mysterious the story was. Though I must agree with tr3x said, there needs to be ...

I really liked your story but I have to agree with the others the two paragraphs are a bit too distracting , well anyway I would really like to know ...

I couldn't agree with you more! I really don't understand why people consider themselves better and above everyone else. Because they go to church every Sunday and your right that’s ...

hey SoLaNge ( i think) well anyway i really enjoyed this poem you put across your feelings clearly ....but i don't really think i can say much since I'm disabled ...

Hello I’m writerchick and I’ll be reviewing your story today I found the concept for your story both captivating and interesting, your description was good but I agree with the ...

i don't know much about poetry but i like this your rhythm was good and flowed nicley . this is a lot better than anything that i'd be able to ...

Hi i will be reviewing you story today. I'm not to great at this so bare with me This was an interesting piece but what i think it lacked was ...

i sometimes find myself looking at certain pieces of writing and wondering how someone can right so well. i know i should critique but it was a very powerful piece ...

well i really cant say i have a best because i have so many bests but if i had to choose I'd say ptolemy's gate cant really remember the author ...

Hey Marth ( can i call you that?) well anyway i thought since you kinda reviewed my short-story id experiment and see if I've got What it take to be ...