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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: In My Eyes

    In the very first paragraph itself you got me intrigued, I liked the line where you related the reflection to a bright star.The metaphors were great.Your last stanza left me ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: The Rose of love

    Your poem was intense and lay an emphasis in choosing your love of your life RIGHTly.The way you have presented is impressive. Looking forward for more great works like this ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Groans: Genre Villanelle

    The way you present your poem is impressive. I am learning a lot through your writing. There is an intense power in the usage of your vocabulary.I was totally into ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: that boy will be the death of me

    Your poem was impressive. I got the theatrical picture in my mind, when I read the first paragraph. The way you described him in next aroused the interest even more. ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: MASK

    The last Paragraph brought goosebumps in me.What you have wrote is very true that nobody in this contemporary world realise and react to. The metaphors are used so cleverly.Your way ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: MASK

    The last Paragraph brought goosebumps in me.What you have wrote is very true that nobody in this contemporary world realise and react to. The metaphors are used so cleverly.Your way ...

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: In a Dark Room

    The words used are intense and give a strong vibe.I enjoyed it. You have used the words cleverly. Looking forward of more like this from you

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall on deaf ears

    Thank you.

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall on deaf ears

    Thank you so much.Your comments were encouraging and I ' ll work on those you've suggested

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall on deaf ears

    Thank you so much. I' ll work on those

    May 22, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Face The Body

    Your poem well spoke about decision making and the intense feeling you empathize about the hurt women.I theatrically got the pictures in my head through your words.The question asked at ...

    May 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: my hurt is worth your happy.

    That gave an intense feeling.Love is always worth the sacrifice.Loved it

    May 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: I won’t ask anymore.

    Those who complain ain't clever,nice work brought up smile and sense to us

    May 21, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fall on deaf ears

    May 21, 2018


We are discreet sheep; we wait to see how the drove is going, and then go with the drove.
— Mark Twain