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Re: In My Eyes
In the very first paragraph itself you got me intrigued, I liked the line where you related the reflection to a bright star.The metaphors were great.Your last stanza left me ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: The Rose of love
Your poem was intense and lay an emphasis in choosing your love of your life RIGHTly.The way you have presented is impressive. Looking forward for more great works like this ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Groans: Genre Villanelle
The way you present your poem is impressive. I am learning a lot through your writing. There is an intense power in the usage of your vocabulary.I was totally into ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: that boy will be the death of me
Your poem was impressive. I got the theatrical picture in my mind, when I read the first paragraph. The way you described him in next aroused the interest even more. ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: MASK
The last Paragraph brought goosebumps in me.What you have wrote is very true that nobody in this contemporary world realise and react to. The metaphors are used so cleverly.Your way ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: MASK
The last Paragraph brought goosebumps in me.What you have wrote is very true that nobody in this contemporary world realise and react to. The metaphors are used so cleverly.Your way ...
May 22, 2018 -
Re: In a Dark Room
The words used are intense and give a strong vibe.I enjoyed it. You have used the words cleverly. Looking forward of more like this from you
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Fall on deaf ears
Thank you.
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Fall on deaf ears
Thank you so much.Your comments were encouraging and I ' ll work on those you've suggested
May 22, 2018 -
Re: Fall on deaf ears
Thank you so much. I' ll work on those
May 22, 2018 -
Re: The Face The Body
Your poem well spoke about decision making and the intense feeling you empathize about the hurt women.I theatrically got the pictures in my head through your words.The question asked at ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: my hurt is worth your happy.
That gave an intense feeling.Love is always worth the sacrifice.Loved it
May 21, 2018 -
Re: I won’t ask anymore.
Those who complain ain't clever,nice work brought up smile and sense to us
May 21, 2018 - Re: Fall on deaf ears May 21, 2018
