Wondergirl59

Wow. This is amazing. I love how you wrote it with the whole, "Your pushing me away, I'm pushing you away, I'm gone, I'm dead" thing. I don't know. I ...

Oh my gosh. Glorious. Just glorious. I now pronounce you, Amazing. There is so much power in these few words -all true- and it astounds me how much that made ...

I really liked this. It shows your feelings, and it's really easy to relate to. I also like how you put your favorite quote in at the end. My favorite ...

This is all so very true. Every word of it. Wonderful poem by the way. I think we all get bullied some time or another, but I think if yours ...

First off, I love the subject of the piece. I am forever being called strange for being myself in school, and am getting tired of it. However, it could use ...

Finally! A realistic love story! But, here goes my reply... OH EM GEE I love it!!!!!!!!!!:D Great detail, great description, great everything! There are a few spelling errors, but the ...

So, the last part kinda sent mini chills down my spine. Just saying. But I really really really like the poem. Awesome imagery, and it has a very good flow ...

Nice! I really like the flow of everything. I also like that you wrapped up the ending with part of the beginning line. Most people wouldn't think that's very creative, ...

This poem should go down in history. Amazing, Astonishing, Awesome. Those are just the "A"s. I could go on through the whole alphabet and have nothing but the Best things ...

That was much better. I really liked it. It was more understandable to read and showed more emotion than the last version. This one is much more better. Awesome job ...

Fantastic! I love this poem. It's really interesting. My favorite line is "I don't want to die; just live a different life." I really like that part. The part about ...

Oh, my. Thanks, you made me cry, at my computer, looking like an idiot. Kidding, that was amazing. It just was. I don't even know what to say because nothing ...

RetroDisco was right, it was more like a list. I didn't show any emotion at all. A poem needs more than metaphor. It needs emotion, detail, your senses. I'm not ...

1) I think this one shows your feelings okay, but it's a little bland. It could use more detail on how you feel. 2) I like this one. It shows ...

When I read this, I wasn't really sure what to think. I like the flow of it, and how you show your desire. But I find it a little confusing, ...