Wonder

Thanks for the review! :D But yeah, I wasn't so sure about that line...I didn't know what to do with it, though, so I just let it be. :/ Yeah... ...

Thanks, Malachi! :D You're awesome!

Write more please! I have to go to bed now so I can't do a full on review, but PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! It's super good!! :D

Haha I can relate to the "why'd you stop" part! :P

Can you delete this post, then? Please?

But...I didn't write this. I didn't post any comment on here at all. I think it could have been my little sister and her friends...grrrrr....

Woah. This is a very deep poem that took my breath away. It describes my sister and I. Wow. Everything about this is perfect. From the cracks in the fingertips ...

I've been really lazy...I accidentally deleted Chapter 1 (well, actually it was my sister's fault) but I never re-wrote it... ~ Wonder

Thank you!! I've been really lazy and have instead been working on another, totally different story. I really should write at least two more chapters. Hmm. ~ Wonder%u2665

I laughed so hard and my sister and I sang this out loud. Great job, ArcticMonkey!! :D I loved it!! ROFL, Wonder

Thank you so much CELJiii! :D

The first line is supposed to mean that the girl (or guy...not really sure if it works for a guy's perspective, as I am not one) tried to believe that ...

Aww! :( That's horrible! My friend is going through the same thing right now, and I'm trying to tell her that this guy is just hurting her -- she cut ...

Thank you Dark! :)

Thanks for the review! ^-^