WolfBoy34102

*claps* Very interesting indeed. I could see everything like I was looking over her shoulder. I do wish you made it longer though. I am sorry about your writers block ...

Hello superminer, I enjoyed your prologue as well and am interested in seeing more from you. I would say the only thing that really bugged me was the first paragraph: ...

I have to agree with jazzy you flesh out the environment very well and I honestly only have one complaint and it isn't even that bad I Promise but at ...

This isn't grammatical review you can ask my girlfriend I suck at those. I do more of how the story flows and how well you describe things because in a ...