Wolf

*roll* I don't mean to be repetitive, but my review will beasically be the same as my review of '.:The Wind:.' IMPORTANT Alot of the sentences should be joined, and ...

The ideas are excellent, but the structure is hard to read. You wrote Her icy blue eyes scanned the trees; they moved quickly with ease across the brown-bottomed oaks. --------- ...

Short but sweet :D I enjoyed reading that, but I kow next to nothing about your main character. I know only that his tribe is gone and he has red ...

Interesting, I enjoyed reading it...but like Kyte said, what's the point? Is it someone describing the Earth? Something like that? :lol: Sorry if my guesses are way off but...:lol:

Wow, that was spectacular! Really amazing piece of writing. I can't find a single thing wrong with it. I envy you, actually. I'm also 12 but my writing is nowhere ...

It's good, but some sentences don't make sense, like this one... ex: Great beasts with manes of crimson fur and eyes of burning hellfire onwards up the steep and treacherous ...

Good job! A very well-written piece; lots of interesting metaphors and similies. It was well structured, but might I suggest pressing 'Enter' ever once in a while? Maybe it's just ...

Nice! But you should do your dialogue like this: “Serves you right! Thanks Garyn!” “No problem!” replied the shaggy grey wolf. Otherwise, it's great! :) >>I love writing about wolves ...

Amazing! I think it is very good; colourful language, it flows nicely, and it was quite interesting to read. Keep up the good work! Except, you might want to change ...

hhmmm...This website is confusing... But we will get used to it. :) :roll: