Wolf

My family is all male accept for me I am the only female in our clan. My bothers are either werewolves or vampires and they will protect me as I ...

Had I retained my defining features? 'Retained'...I dunno, it sounds weird in contrast to the vocabulary that Coden usually chooses. I shook my head and tried not to dwell on ...

I agree with xyberangel on how you could add more imagery to suggest that your pain was physical and the other person's was emotional. But Snoink already pointed out what ...

Hhmm...I did think about it. It's really short, and well, yeah. Short. No one stays in love by chance, but by work? Not true. I wish I could stop liking ...

I think you should capitalize your I's, so that it looks like this: You remain silent and unseen. Nameless to my lips but I cannot hide the scars you left. ...

Haha! :) That was hilarious! I love it! It completely fits into the tune of Jingle Bells! xD :lol: Oh Jingle bells, Ringing cells, Pink designer shoes, Oh what fun ...

That was... Amazing. Really, that was. The imagery was excellent and it flowed sooo well. It had a semi-hidden current of wisdom, but it didn't sound like a lecture. I ...

*sob**bawl* I hate wars, I really do. They are just a wast of lives, and all for what? Nothing. What greatness has ever been born of War? Anyways, it's cool ...

Ok, well... Ok. No offense, but that wasn't very good. The structure was..okay, I guess, but the theme is just pointlessly emo and gruesome. I mean, there are good emo ...

Earlier that morning she had attempted to speak with her friends but with no luck, they has turned her down and walked away. Replace the comma after All except for ...

Firstly, this would look way better if you used proper punctuation. Secondly, the imagery was pleasing. Thirdly, unfortunately, this was cliched. There are countless poems on this subject. But anyways

You? Bad at poetry? I think not! The grammar and flow of this is flawless, but I think a little imagery would be nice. I'm a horrible poet so I ...

Whoa...that was really, really good. There was a faint but unique rhyming scheme and I loved it! & I broke off your legs, to keep you here all night. Won't ...

Well, I'm not sure how I feel about this. I was really intrigued by the title, but when I read the first line...yuck. Here's what I think about this in ...

You write poetry too? I'm so jealous! :D Anyways, sorry for being so harsh in my latest reviews of your work. :( I meant well. 1.Canvas of colors, splashed across ...