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Azila -- I'm sure you'll do well in the contest; this is extremely good. I love the borderline humour and how you wrote it from a cat's perspective. I am ...

I'm determined to review everything of yours, Azila! :lol: She opens her eyes. She stands. These sound choppy compared to the fluid eloquence displayed in the rest of the piece. ...

Seraph! It's been a while since I reviewed anything of yours, but I've been meaning to review this for weeks. I would have gotten around to it earlier but for ...

In the future, please don't use attachments for your work, okay? :wink: But I got the download to work, so here's your critique: The ghostly moon shone brightly in the ...

mine were the hands that held you down, that drowned you in a sea of night – [Comment 1] mine were the hands that held you close, and let them ...

Sam -- I don't think this is a bad poem, but its just not my cuppa' tea. It's very simple, and I would like more imagery...although that would be kind ...

canislupus -- Wow! This is spectacular! Amazing work. Well, I here's my two cents: :P I shake back my mane of dark brown hair, and kick my feet in the ...

*Muahaha* Now that I've been un-grounded, I can catch up with you on this. Which I could do, I reminded myself, If I was a werecat. No capital I in ...

Azila -- Wow, this is quite a bit longer than your usual flash-fiction! Anyways. I'm too lazy to read two pages of crits, so forgive me if I repeat what ...

Azila Dear -- How could I not read it? First of all, it's written by you, which guarantees that it will be nothing short of amazing. Secondly, it's Fantasy. I ...

Eh...I just realized that there's a revised edition. >.< I started this critique a couple days back, but I [was] grounded so I didn't get the chance to finish. I'm ...

Broadwaygirl -- For the sake of not repeating myself, look at my critique for 'Someone'. Here you have the same basic issues, except for the nit-picks. Punctuation. Grammar. Capitalize your ...

Broadwaygirl -- Is it you, Emily? From 73? It's Camille! :) If you're not who I think you are...heh, sorry. Anyways, onto my critique. At the moment, this is a ...

Phoebe -- (Neat name, by the way) Echo to Cade - this is lovely, but at the moment it seems to be separated into chunks, and I can't seem to ...

Skye -- This is very confusing. First you are talking about sidewalks, and then you go off in all these different directions and leave the sidewalks behind. I was kind ...