WillowPaw1

Hey, Em101cats! Soooo, series finale, hmm? Cool. ^.^ Um so the only critique for the review today is the conversation Bluejay and Stormcloud had at the end. I really got ...

Hi! Since I won't be having much to say, this is going to be a short review. Anyways! I loved the struggle and confusion flung in here. And, along with ...

Hi, there! Congrats on ending your novel! Gosh, how much I am jealous. I am never able to finish a novel. :P First off, I'll do a couple nitpicks. "I ...

Hi, Em! I must say this: I feel this is one of the best chapters yet. To me , of course. But the emotion was much stronger than all the ...

Hi! I'm just going to do a super quick review, since this is more for entertainment that a long reading. First: you title is spelled wrong. :P Probably just a ...

Hey, there! I'm going to be pointing out nitpicks, but not a lot since r4p17 has seemed to get some of them. Quickly, she walked over to the bowl of ...

Hi! They were just lying around doing nothing, so I knew it was probably a good time to tell them the plan considering the fact that they were sitting around ...

Hi, again. It's WillowPaw here. :3 So, I agree with WallFlower here, I think the last two poems really impacted me more and were much stronger. First: On the Tree ...

Hey hey hey! Let's get to the review pronto! I'm going to make important points that were running through my head when I read this chapter. 1) Great use of ...

Hey, there, WillowPaw here to review this piece you have written. Okay, one of my concerns that it brought to my attention easily is the I's that are not capitalized. ...

Hi there! So interesting. I loved Frozen. :) I found two little spacing errors that are quick fixes. gold, and white.Her father’s eyes were Space before "her". was ultimately her ...

Wow. I'm agreeing with the reviewers below. Engrossing. Truly engrossing. You just sucked me in. I really loved this, I really did. Now, I'm going to explain further about why ...

Hey, Percybeth (by the way awesome username), it's me WillowPaw1 here to give you a review! This is ganna be a short one... I agree with Aley completely on that ...

First of all, I must say - this review will be much easier for me because I have this exact same problem: stage fright. Though I don't imagine why I'd ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first post! I usually do nitpicks first, but I won't spam this review with them because 1) you seem pretty in ...