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Thank you, thank you, Snoinkus. I totally forgot about this poem...*cringes* I hate to have thought I even wrote it! It's so...bland! lol I sure HOPE I've improved since then! ...

This was definitely rushed (apt name for a title lol). Aleesha just seemed to be like oh wow, I'm getting married. Normally she would be more excited, and wouldn't she ...

Great job, write me! I can't wait to see the continuation of this story, and the character's voice stood out really well for me. It was a pleasant read, and ...

As usual, Dusky, brilliant. I loved the story, and you engaged me from the beginning. The opening needs a little work, as it seems to be awkwardly constructed, but keep ...

It was great! Pleeeeease post more-I'm dying to read!

Please, pleaes, please! Man, this story's got me goin'! lol Keep it up!

I really liked this poem, Ofour. In order to make it flow better, though, I'd highly suggest not capitalizing every line, if at all. It would make it seem more ...

The first two paragraphs are completely unnecessary. I loved the whole story though! I want to hear more about what happens to them...

Good so far! Seems a little unrealistic, and there's not a big BANG of plot, but I like it! Post more!

That almost made me cry! *wipes away tears* Awesome job! I'm sure it'll get published...I'll sue the editor if it doesn't!

Thanks so much! Wow-I didn't expect this many positive responses! !_! Thanks though for all your suggestions. Cheri>>I took your suggestion and changed it to the present tense. There had ...

Thanks guys. Any others? I'd really like to see what you think!

I liked this a lot! Got to run, but it's really good so far! Hope to hear more of it...

I liked it. :D Loved, in fact! Very creative, and I totally adored Kit. Don't have time to crit it right now, but when I get the chance, I will!

Loved it. Saw it in your blog, and still loved it. Great job-you should write like this more often!