Wiggy

If only I understood this... if only ...lol Nice imagery though. Random, which I like indeedy! Wiggy ;)

hehe How do you get mentioned?

I shall try it indeed! :D Wiggy ;)

It was really nice! I think you need to continute this definitely. What's the story called? Wiggy ;)

I like it-more, more I say! :D Wiggy ;)

Thanks DD. You are sooo sweet! :D

Weird, but I liked it! It was really cute! I am so going to have to try one of those poems! :D

I'm definitely reading all of this tomorrow...:D

I loved it! You have a lot of talent Chanson. I couldn't find anything other than what was said before. Keep writing! Wiggy ;)

I love it! Keep on! :D

Loved it, loved it, and did I say loved it? This wasn't your best, but it was still great! Everyone took care of crits already...:D

It's something a lot of people can relate to...nice job! But try to include a little more dialogue. Descriptions great, dialogue bout 6/10. Keep writing!

Awesome job! All I would want to say has been said above...:D

DD, I might just do a chapter by chapter crit since I literally have no time! OMG I feel soooo guilty in not having critted it yet...and you being the ...

I see what you're saying...(and I remember you posting somewhere that you like morbid stuff! lol). It was a very sad poem, though! Keep writing! Wiggy ;)