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Re: What I want
Ha! I seriously laughed when I read the ending. So true, though (: Stupid sluts, clouding my judgement. (; This was actually for a twisted love contest. I honestly had ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 3)
I'm writing, I'm writing! (: Thanks. I really appreciate it. And, though I can't say Kali will come back,I can say there might be a little surprise. I'll just have ...
Apr 20, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 2)
Thanks! I'll definitely revise it. What I was trying to say was that Ian agreed with Breanne. He believes he killed her sister but I get what your saying. It ...
Apr 18, 2009 -
Re: Saved (part 2)
Thanks a lot. I thought that this was about to be torn to shreds ha ha. I can do better than this, but I'm siked to continue. Unfortunately, I have ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable Chapter 1 (I made revisions!)
Rubin: Oh No! Please don't tell me it sounds like...that book. Ugh, it is like the anti-christ. I absolutely hate Twilight. Well, I'll be sure to PM you when the ...
Apr 11, 2009 -
Re: Saved
aw. I'm sorry you didn't like it. I love sad stories because real life isn't perfect and not everything has a happily ever after. I know that most people don't ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Saved
Wow. Thanks so much. This was hard for me to write and I got so frustrated with myself that I just said 'the heck with it' and wrote what I ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable Chapter 1
Hmm, interesting points. Thanks. There is a reason though that she didn't read Lucas' freind's minds. She also didn't read Lucas's mind. She doesn't like too. She only does it ...
Apr 7, 2009 -
Re: Inalienable
Thank you! I'll definetely work on my grammar more. I promise you, it's normally not that bad. I wrote this last night but I had to get it down. The ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
Oh I know. I don't want this to be published. This is my first poem up. I wanted to put something...sentimental up first. I just wanted to see what everyone ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Plz suggest a book
Well I'll tell you some of my all time favorites: The Named The Dark all by and Marianne Curley The Key Night World by L.J. Smith Trickster's Choice by Tamora ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
That's actually a really good point. I completely agree. I already know it sucked because I did write it for myself and not an audience. When I wrote it I ...
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: Is this not love?
Incredible. From the moment I started this that was all I could think. It's beautiful and truthful. Once more I repeat, incredible.
Apr 5, 2009 -
Re: .
I really liked this. I love the way the story is written from a child's perspective. It had a few grammatical errors here and there but other than that i ...
Apr 5, 2009
