WhiteTiger93

Okay, here I am to review. ^^ I'm sorry, it's not so great, but I'll try to give you a good, definite review. This was pretty good. You have a ...

Well, everyone else got here before me, but here is your review as requested. ^^ I thought this was okay. I mean, you have really good parts but I didn't...really ...

Okay, this is a really interesting peice, but it kind of reminded me of Eragon at some parts. ^^ Not sure if you've read it or not, but I was ...

Lovely. ^^ It's refreshing to see so much imagery, really. (: That was, by far, your strongest point. Now, off to point one. While, your imagery was at it's strongest, ...

Alright. Here I am, as requested! (: Chips has already gotten to all the good stuff so I'll ell you what I think you need to work on. (: One. ...

I applogize, but I can't really critique this. I am terrible with nonfiction as it is and I read and re-read this one but I still couldn't really find anything ...

Here, as requested. Sorry it took me forever to get here. I was grounded. ): Anyway, everyone' got most everything so I'll just do a quick little review. One, I ...

Great. I'm late as always. ): Sorry it took me so long and it seems that everyone else got all the good stuff, but I will try to give you ...

Kat! (: Here, as requested. (: Sorry it took me so long, but I was grounded. I'm here now, but Jon said most everything. :P I will try though. (: ...

First, I'm so sorry it took me so long to review this. I was grounded. O: Anyway, here I go. (: Beautiful poem. Wonderful. (: Now I'm off to show ...

But don't YOU see. Bella is not just a girl. Okay let me ask you something. Bella has perfectly clear skin, slender, heart shaped face and long brown hair. Even ...

Sorry Shella, I meant to reveiw this earlier, but was having difficulties finding time *looks at Shella sheepishly* forgive me? Anyway, since everyone's got your grammatical errors I'll just tell ...

Ha! I seriously hate Twilight and Stephnie Meyer. With a passion! This was funny in a little kid kind of way. M: It's Mik. Like Prik. Like D- Haha. I ...

Fantastic. I really can't stand Twilight and I never have had a tolerance for any of the charaters. (I'm not even going to get started on Stephenie Meyer) Anyway, I'm ...

This was definetly...interesting. (: You had me hooked from the girl putting oranges in her bra. (: That's just weird, but I likt weird. Only a few tips. We didn't ...