Werthan

What was this about? I feel like it was not very clear, but the prose was beautiful. I guess you can have beautiful prose that's not about anything, like some ...

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Please break this up into bits and publish it in bits. This is a bit long for one thing.

I'm sorry if that came across as harsh. I think I need to work on learning. to review better.

Thanks!

Thanks, I'm glad this wasn't horrible. I sort of rushed it because I just wanted to write something. I'll probably be doing that for a while while I practice. I ...

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Thanks! Well, one of the goals of this poem was to sound over-the-top in how it spoke, so using archaic forms of English contributes to that, along with the bad ...

Thanks. I'll fix the Early Modern English parts then. The goal of this was to sound really over-the-top and nothing more, but if having bad Early Modern English distracts from ...

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I normally can't stand freeform poems, because too often they just feel like prose with lines in-between, but this one felt very poetic and I actually liked the sound of ...

You spelled that right. It's loosely inspired by the danse macabre/dance of death/Totentanz, if you've ever heard of that.

The prose is quite amazing and I loved the last sentence. I just feel like something about it was a bit short and I can't figure out what. I would ...

The prose is quite amazing and I loved the last sentence. I just feel like something about it was a bit short and I can't figure out what. I would ...

The prose is quite amazing and I loved the last sentence. I just feel like something about it was a bit short and I can't figure out what. I would ...

This is amazing. I want to read more. So, there are monsters that make her live out all her childhood nightmares? That's fascinating and terrifying. I would like to hear ...