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Re: Young Charlotte’s demise
Hello, vampricone! Wist here is back for another review. This work is relatively short compared to some of your others, but that does not stop it from packing a significant ...
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Re: Coffee - Freshly Roasted
Hello, Kate! I'm here to review this lovely poem of yours. This poem touches a deep part of my soul. I can feel it echoing there for generations to come. ...
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Re: The differences between Laughing Jack and Laughing Jill
Hello, Vampricone. Wist here to review this essay of yours! This was a fascinating read, as I'm distantly interested in Creepypastas. I understand that this is about as casual as ...
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Re: Trainees Take on the Apocalypse Chapter Two: When You Get a Notification from That One App You Forgot Was There
Hello, Kate. I'm here to review Chapter Two! Let's ago~ Overall, it's a solid Chapter Two, with a revisit of the original conflict to build some more tension before we ...
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Re: Circus Wall
Hello, Akira! I'm Wist and I'm back to review a sequel. This poem/song demonstrates one of the main strengths I touched on in my previous review: the work's emotional depth. ...
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Re: Trainees Take on the Apocalypse Chapter One: A Chaotic Job Interview
Hello again, Kate! I'm here from the prologue to review Chapter One. Well, I see there have been no wholesome-family-killing car crashes yet, so you get to stay out of ...
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Re: Circus Story
Hello, Akira! I'm Wist and I'm here to review your poem/song. (Sorry, I can't tell!) Your work here clearly shows the POV of someone who has been betrayed, and I ...
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Re: Trainees Take on the Apocalypse Prologue
Hello, bestie! I'm here for yet another review. I seem to be on a roll with your work lately. This is a dramatic beginning to a story you got here. ...
Jun 10, 2024 -
Re: The Comedi-hen Strikes Again
Hello Kate! Wist here with another review. Now it's your poetry's turn! Yippee!! Your poem here has all of the fundamentals of a Kate classic: rhyming and comedy. Your short ...
Jun 10, 2024 -
Re: Hum
Hello, avian! This is Wist, and I'm here to review your fascinating poem. My first thought is that this poem is utterly unsettling. It's a mixture of warm imagery and ...
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Re: Daydreaming
Hello there, NoOne! This is Wist. I am here to review your poem. I want to start by saying that this poem is incredibly captivating. I believe this is the ...
Jun 8, 2024 -
Re: An Anachronistic Aye, Chapter 1.2
Hi, Kate! Wist here with a review of this suddenly gut-wrenching part two of chapter one. First off, I'm upset with you. You painted the picture of this happy family ...
Jun 7, 2024 -
Re: Chapter one - Is it really the beginning?
Hello, Pretty45! This is Wist here with a review of your work. Your work here serves as a good foundation for an opening chapter. You start by providing a potential ...
Jun 6, 2024 -
Re: chemistry reactions
Hey, Pol! This is Wist here to review this lovely poem. This is the first time I've ever given you a review, and I'm glad it was this one! Your ...
Jun 5, 2024 -
Re: Letters from the Front Lines
Hello ry! This is Wist, and I'm here to review your lovely work. First, the format of this story was incredibly innovative! The idea of telling a story through letters ...
Jun 4, 2024
