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Re: prayers without answer
Hello, farq! I'm Wist and I'm here to review this lovely poem you got here. This is such a beautiful poem that resonates with me. It tells an authentic story ...
Jul 18, 2024 -
Re: marry me?
Hello, Kate! I'm here to review this lovely poem because of course I am. flying pigs and a talking carrot Is there supposed to be a stanza break after "flying ...
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Re: i want to be a butterfly
Hello, Ley! I have to say, this is an utterly gorgeous poem. I can't believe you have the audacity to say you're not really a poet and then bless YWS ...
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Re: Confessions from a Girl Who Can't Sleep
Hello, Valkryia! This is quite the relatable poem you have here. I love how your stanza length changes to build tension and give the reader some breathing room. Your one-line ...
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Re: The Process of Drowning
Hello, Ley! I'm here to review another one of your poems. Overall, this poem wears its questions and uncertainty well. It reads like a train of thought and the reader ...
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Re: A simple bruise
Hey again, Vampricone! It's been a while. I thought I'd drop in to leave a review for this short story. Before reviewing this, I read "John's Cut," so I'm going ...
Jul 13, 2024 -
Re: We All Die Empty Handed and other June Poems
Hello, Kate! I'm here to review this collection of poems you got here. Because if it has your name on it, I will probably review it. Unless it has my ...
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Re: How to Outline Your Novel
Hello, Valkriya! This is such a relatable work! It feels like no matter what writing advice you take, you always end up here so it's nice to see someone put ...
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Re: The Fields of My Childhood
Hey, Ley! I'm here to review lovely your poem here! It's no secret that I love artistic elements in poems, so making your poem both focus on colors and incorporate ...
Jul 10, 2024 -
Re: YOU, all in capitals
Hello, Isbah! Wist is here to review this lovely poem. Your imagery here is incredibly potent with the juxtaposition of the poem's title being in all caps and the speaker's ...
Jul 9, 2024 -
Re: The Mental Group
Hey, Kate! I'm loving the new form of poetry! I love the concept of chatroom poetry. You've worked very hard to make this. However, the method you used to create ...
Jul 8, 2024 -
Re: I. AM. 𝚌𝚘𝚗𝚝𝚛𝚘𝚕
Hello, Kate! I always love to see another fun-flavored Kate poem ^^ You play with fonts so beautifully here. It feels so authentically you, with text RP action tags and ...
Jul 7, 2024 -
Re: The Most One-Sided Love
Hello, Logan! This is a lovely but sad poem here and I'm here to review it. I've seen several writing pieces about loving fictional characters, but I love how you've ...
Jul 6, 2024 -
Re: I lost my voice three times that season
Hey, Glauke! This is a beautiful poem here. Originally I thought it was going to be something tragic based on screaming or loss, but I am pleasantly surprised that it ...
Jul 5, 2024 -
Re: How to Make a RP Character Profile!
Hello, Kate! This poem is. A. Mood. You shoved all the feelings of the RPMO craze into a poem. I am in this poem and I feel offended. Eek. With ...
Jul 4, 2024
