WeasleyDragonStar

You have no idea how hard I'm laughing on the inside. Since this was mostly a fun poem, I give no criticism. Love your part on vampires. Very fun. Keep ...

Hmm...I can't leave too long of a review, since the poem is so short. I'll try my best. It's sweet and simple. Often times I think of poetry like this ...

Will try shortening seventh paragraph. I love that Afghan girl--she's so cool looking. Thanks so much!

Hi, ElderOne. Nice to see you again. Ummm......there is a reason I put such a long paragraph praising Ronnie, and it won't make sense now, and I understand your criticism. ...

Oh, yeah, you're right. I was kind of not listening to what I was writing. Thanks!

Thank you! Yeah, it is important to branch out a little. If you've ever viewed any of my other works on here, you would see that this takes on a ...

You didn't offend me at all. It's hard to tell through reveiws, I guess!

So, this boy that she doesn't know, Gunther, dropped his book on the sidewalk (fell out of his backpack, most likely scenario, since he was using it for school). "A ...

Thanks!

This is a very nice piece of contemporary poetry. I like the message and theme. Nice, eloquent word choice shapes the poem. I think that you possess the talent to ...

Gunther is a boy (same age as she, eighteen) living in Mayton. You'll meet him properly if or when i post chapter 3. You'll see later that he dropped his ...

Hello again. The reason Amalah left is because the Zionists were granted the land of Palestine, forcing the Arabs out. Yeah--NOBODY writes about Palestine. Very few. Severed ears...Zionists ripped ear

Thanks (I like your name). To answer your question, Gunther has no idea what happened to her. She met him after her traumatic experience. If you want to know what ...

Thanks, Cricket. I like to reply to my commentators, so: "Injun"--Since this is the South (1940's south), "Injun" wasn't really desirable (big racial problems) "Smeared by....smeared by what?"--To be

Good teenager voice.