Way2Dawn

Great in this piece it has a bit of emotion and a lot of creativity. The flow this is a bit bumpy along te way but has hit all the ...

Nice poem sweet yet a bit too short. The title fits the poem great! I'm completely confused lol! However the rhymes where smooth and went well with what you were ...

Great poem short and to the point. You describe the rain as it is a part of you as any feeling. The rain my mask your tears but when its ...

Nice poem regarding an age old game, yet I can't help but to feel something much deeper then a game of strategy. Nevertheless the flow of the poem was smooth ...

Sweet and lovely to say the lest. I have to tip my hat to you and keep it removed writing this review all in respect for your friend that has ...

Life of danger and chaos? I might have went another way, Though I have to agree that chaos and pain may not be the best way to live but it ...

quite a amazing poem best short work Ive read in a while as well. Hope is something that should be held on to cause' in the end its all we ...

Though your name seems to betray this piece (should this be a bio-poem) I really like this it feels like a character model from a compelling story. I like that ...

Great work on your bio-poem (if this does indeed run parallel to your life). Fine writing I can't imagine writing a poem about myself not that I'm conceded. Just it ...

I see way you put this piece in the 'other poetry' section, yet the originality of your work its possibly the greatest beauty in your writing! Minor flaws do not ...

Lol nice job on this very creative and original. It drew my attention by the tittle and didn't let go until the last comment. Nice way of thinking outside the ...

Nice work and bit short, yet nevertheless it was well written. People do have a tendency to, well to be frank, suck! However, should you be able to forgive them ...

Nice poem especially due to the fact that this is your first. Im not too big on poems, yet I can feel the emotion in thought put into this piece ...

I like it a lot actually and find myself wanting to read more. I believe that the best way to get a reader to enjoy your work is to get ...

Quite excellent work on this piece emotion and I feel that its true (meaning that you wrote this about yourself). This bio-poem was a bit dark in its own light ...