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I love how whimsical this piece is. The pastel dream line is just perfect, and the image of cities lying down across a cloud is just very beautiful. The mention ...

This is definitely very interesting. However, like the others have said, there are some sections which seem disjointed from the rest of the story. Yes, the imagery is powerful, but ...

We don't have letters either. There's the MYP grading system, which has a scale for every class, then another conversion to get the final grade, which is out of 7. ...

Hello Greyed! It's nice to meet you. The first thing that jumped out at me was the vivid imagery here. I can almost see everything happening. Now, on to a ...

Heya. I thought I recognized the name from the Storybook that (sadly) died, so I thought I'd go here to review it. It really was an interesting storybook. forcing my ...

This is a good poem, but I feel that it is lacking some depth. You tell a very moving story, but I can't relate very well. In poetry, you don't ...

I'm in the middle of Crank, and I must say that it's interesting. I've never really been fond of novels told in poems, but this one grabbed my attention. I ...

Hello Tim, and I must say this is a very passionate poem. However, I feel that you can express your emotions better through freeverse. Structured poetry is somewhat limiting, with ...

Eh, it's sort of bland. Reading it for class right now. I still think that it could be better, but it was translated so I guess it's fine. Just finished ...

Very good piece, I enjoyed reading it. I am still not sure of what exactly the narrator is, but I'm assuming a werewolf of sorts? Maybe related to canines. You ...

Oh my, is this really true? Wow... this was so heartfelt and emotional, and so tragic, though bizzare. Well, I absolutely love the voice you use. It's the voice of ...

Aw, this was really adorable. The little events here really tell the story of the two lovers. It's very simple, brief, and powerful. Love is pulling you into his lap ...

Hello Kaityjay. I have to say that this poem didn't strike me that much. I mean, this could be very moving and inspirational if done just right, but you're not ...

This was an amazingly strong and heartfelt poem. However, I feel that you could have made the haunted feel stronger by refining your words a bit more. My father, a ...

Hey Winter! This was a beautiful poem, I have to say. For your first, this was much better than my first try. Anyway, I'm done with nostalgia. Time to get ...