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Re: First part
D: "slaughtered them all, children and women. (...) The Korin that they always knew had returned." I'm sorry but WHAT
Sep 5, 2024 -
Re: First part
Not gonna lie, this is not very good advice. Overly describing things is not the way to go, so something in between would be ideal. hehe no ones gonna find ...
Sep 5, 2024 -
Re: Enemies in crime. Chapter Three 2.4
Why are there 3 bots here? o.O
Mar 30, 2021 -
Re: (WIP Title)- Prologue pt.1
Ohh ok, that makes sense. Wait, you started designing a language in high school?! That's awesome! And no problem :D I really enjoyed reading this.
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Medieval Story
No problem :)
Sep 11, 2020 -
Re: Extra Chronicle 1: The Sword and Servent
Yes it does, I feel so slow XD
Sep 10, 2020 -
Re: Neighborhood Tales: The Tale of a Hedgehog (Chapters 1 and 2)
No problem :) I hope I can read them, with school and such. But I'll try!
Aug 20, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 3: A Will Not Your Own
That makes sense, and no problem!
Aug 17, 2020 -
Re: Memoirs of a Sky Kingdom - Chapter 2 - Aerial Tribulations
Oh, ok, that makes sense. And I'd be happy to read chapter 3!
Aug 11, 2020 -
Re: Conquest of Shadows Chapter 2
I would love to to!
Aug 10, 2020 -
Re: Chronicles of Valarian 2: A Fate Worse Than Death
Nice job with chapter 2! I really liked it and wanted to review, but StarlitMind already said what I wanted to. Nevertheless, this is a nice little prologue to tell ...
Aug 9, 2020 -
Re: Memoirs of a Sky Kingdom - Chapter 1 - The Contract
No problem!
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: Memoirs of a Sky Kingdom - Prologue
No problem!
Aug 8, 2020 -
Re: Old high school projects autumn mash-up
Oh, that make sense
Aug 7, 2020 -
Re: Old high school projects autumn mash-up
You're welcome :)
Aug 7, 2020
