Wandwaver

Umm...I don't have too many suggestions. It is really good. Keep at it, old friend.

I don't think that's going to happen. Man, if evil wins in this series, I'm going to be so....angry. I think RAB is Black's brother, but maybe not. IF Voldy ...

that is....sadly, accurate. Very good.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHArd to read due to formatting errors, but hilarious!

I'm not sure if the narrator in my play should be her like in the book or an actual narrator.

I think it's a good idea. You may need to do moe with it. For instance, if that's what you want to do, shelf everything else and love this like ...

Know what it is? It IS an interesting concept....but it's never really done right. This one is an exception. And I'm not even the intended audience group. I just really ...

I will say this; I don't usually read books with female heroines. I hate the moie "Mulan." and other like stories. I read this book in one day. Litterally, less ...

Thanks, guys. And trust me, you will get a good deal of this over the summer. Just not now. I picked, apparently, a very inconvenient time to fall ill...

haha, I could still use any suggestions for it, though! It is too close, you are right.

Thanks. I use the name Middle-Lands because it is the middle layer of existence in my world. The upper is the World of Life, the lower of death. Any ideas ...

I'm so lost in all these! It is good. That ending is haunting. KEEP IT UP, BUDDY, WE'VE GOT A LONG NIGHT AHEAD OF US!

It's good...boy, do I know what that feeling is like, and...boy, did this bring me back there! Is there more? WW

It should be "too." I agree with Ohhewwo whole heartedly. This was very imaginative. There are two ways to handle "cute" characters; embrace the trend or push away from it. ...

I know this is a double post, but how is this?