Wanderer777

Loved it! This was a great piece of work and I loved the humour in it. I can't wait for the rest to be posted! Please, hurry and write it!

I didn't say specifcally that there was only 17 in existence. Just 17 dragons left at Crystal Valley, at least I think I did. Maybe I made a mistake on ...

Hey thanks! I actually didn't catch that first mistake and now that you mention the others...I'll fix those as soon before I forget. I'm glad you like it!

I loved it! I'm not really great with the crit part but I can tell you that I didn't find anything wrong with it and also, keep up the good ...

Loved it! You're better than my sister (who I get her to do my poetry for English shh). I like your poems, please write more. :)

Okay, a Lang is a race created by the evil wizard Kahul who lives in the desert. As a reader, you will learn more about Kahul later on it the ...

Hey thank-you so much for those! And I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll take your advice and make those changes. Now that you pointed those little pieces, they don't really ...

Hey thanks. I know I gotta work on the beginning and feel free to give me tips on how to do that. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I really liked this. I'm not an overly big fan of poetry, but I really liked this one. There was just something about it that I can't quite put my ...

Well, Havi is quite a nag and Galada is an irattating person. I wasn't trying to make the reader feel sorry for Max, it was merely a way to get ...

This story really has no chapters just yet. I thought I'd deal with all that when I finished. So feel free to criticize it. Thank-you! :lol: