WallFlower

Hi there, emmaannaolivia :) First, I love how you ended this story. It's unique and different from anything I was expecting. Good job! :) Just a few nitpicks. I decide ...

Hi there :) This chapter is really sweet! Threbus is so awkward, and I love it! :) Just a few little grammar and spelling mistakes. and then we hear a ...

Hi there :) You have a very interesting story. I like your tone of voice and style of writing. I only had a couple nitpicks. Chapter 8 Fire blasted from ...

Hi :) First, I had no idea who Austin Mahone was, so I looked him up on Spotify. You've officially made a fan out of me :D I really like ...

If you hadn't said that this was for the Olympics, I would have thought you were psychotic. :P This was really hilarious! It did get a little confusing because I ...

Hi again ;) First off, once again, I really like the plot this story is taking. It's a new twist on the whole dystopian/sci-fi thing. On to the nitpicks :P ...

Hi NerdBird :) I REALLY like the story you have going here. It's similar to many other books that are out there, but different too. I think you've found a ...

0.o Woooo! Creeeeeepy! I had actually never heard this story before, but I will definitely tell it around a campfire somewhere :) I like the way you told this story. ...

Wow, I really like this story! You have great descriptions and wonderful characters, even though I was getting a little annoyed with them :P This chapter was grammatically correct as ...

Hi there :) That so sad! I just actually shed a tear, and that doesn't usually happen to me. You had wonderful descriptions. The dialogue flowed naturally and Heather's thought ...

Hi there :) Way to confuse me with a plot twist like that. I couldn't decide if I should laugh or stick with being confused :P I only had a ...

Hi there :) My only critique is that this is one giant block of text. Have you considered dividing it into paragraphs? That way it would be easier to read ...

Hi there :) I know you said that English isn't your first language, so I'll go easy on the grammatical stuff. But I would like to point out a few ...

Hi! Happy Review Day! I really like the idea behind this poem. You have a powerful delivery and good wording. Nice job for a first poem. Little nitpicks: I am ...

I was suppressing giggles through that whole thing :) I love poems written in the villanelle style. As far as I can tell you got the formatting right, and I ...