WaitingForLife

First of all, welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll like it here. ^^ So, umm... what should I say? This was very well written, it had no gramatical issues, you ...

This is going to be a pretty useless comment, but I wanted to drop by and say that I absolutely loved this. I couldn't find any nitpicks (truth be told, ...

Heh, this made me laugh, which was the point of it I guess, so good job! :) Nothing really to criticize except that it's written "invisible". ;) But yeah, keep ...

Off the bat, you've got a talent for writing. Really. I'm pretty sure you already knew this, but just felt like pointing it out. You've got a good main character, ...

Well, first of all, I liked the story in itself. You have a good and believable main character, eventhough he is a vampire, which is a good thing to have. ...

M'lord Lord Anzius, I cometh here humbly to review thy text. :D Jokes aside, I thought this was a good account of Finnish music. I personally hate Finnish music, (mostly ...

Heya, First things first: I really liked the idea. One thing that caught my eye was the fact that Maya had a disease or something (I'm not sure what, but ...

Heya, As said before me, you have a gift in writing, and this seems like a very interesting story you're cooking up. I did find a few nitpicks, but they're ...

Hullo, Ill be reviewing your story, hope it helps :) Before I get to the nitpicks and such, I'd like to say I really enjoyed your descriptions in the beginning. ...

Alrighty then, I'll review your story for you. Straight out of hand, I'd advise you to take your time in describing scenes and the actions more carefuly. Reading through your ...

Hey, This is going to be a pretty useless review, seeing as I can't find anything to criticize. The rhymes were all there and great. The flow was smooth. The ...

Its short and straight to the point, which gives it an even sadder aura. Simply stating the facts tends to be a good course many times when trying to create ...

This is truly a touching poem. I enjoy reading poetry eventhough I can't write it at all, and I enjoyed reading this particular one. The only thing I suggest you ...

I completely agree with the comments before mine. Your'e a really good poet and your skills haven't certainly gotten rusty or anything. That, or you just got lucky with this ...

Hey, WaitingForLife here to review your poem, I really liked this work. True, it is sort of depressing, but in my opinion depression is a very strong emotion that is ...