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Re: science is scary; poetry is scary
I really like the idea of scientific vocabulary. I don't know if it's just me being dense but I don't understand what it's about unless it's just scientific vocabulary. Is ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: The First Rider: 2. Burial
Hello, maybeandrew The first thing I'd have to say about this chapter is, wow; It's not that the first part hadn't drawn me in, but this second chapter made me ...
Feb 3, 2021 -
Re: Limited - Short story set in a twisted future America.
shwoooo, dang this is very deep. It gives me a vibe from a movie I watched a long while ago, possibly called "The Thinning" very very interesting. Anyway the premise ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: It's No Fun Being A Saint
Ooh, already with a nice intro: "The footsteps of my captors echoed down the hall, loud against the stone floor. I assumed it was stone, at least. I couldn’t exactly ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: Normal
I really like the introduction of the characters and the way the scenes build up to another. The flow is fantastic and very easy to follow. I think it's an ...
Feb 2, 2021 -
Re: God Makes a Deal with the Devil
Ha! I love this. The humour is impeccable. This definitely gave me Good Omens vibes; the connection between God and Satan reflects the connection between Crowley and Aziraphale in Good ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: Don't Trust the Light
Holy smokes! The detail of the horrific murder of the Vanderbilt family is horrifying. Although I agree with reviewer MissGangamash, sometimes less is more. The impact of "Do not trust ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: Bottled Euphoria
Very nicely written. wow! I find the "I look up at the sky. The tree branches and its leaves block the stars, but the leaves on the tree shine brighter ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: DUMB
The fact that this is a true story boggles my mind. Some people choose to be ignorant about things they don't want to understand. Poor Brent I had a few ...
Feb 1, 2021