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Vryog

  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: science is scary; poetry is scary

    I really like the idea of scientific vocabulary. I don't know if it's just me being dense but I don't understand what it's about unless it's just scientific vocabulary. Is ...

    Feb 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Narrative, Historical Fiction Re: The First Rider: 2. Burial

    Hello, maybeandrew The first thing I'd have to say about this chapter is, wow; It's not that the first part hadn't drawn me in, but this second chapter made me ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Limited - Short story set in a twisted future America.

    shwoooo, dang this is very deep. It gives me a vibe from a movie I watched a long while ago, possibly called "The Thinning" very very interesting. Anyway the premise ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: It's No Fun Being A Saint

    Ooh, already with a nice intro: "The footsteps of my captors echoed down the hall, loud against the stone floor. I assumed it was stone, at least. I couldn’t exactly ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: Normal

    I really like the introduction of the characters and the way the scenes build up to another. The flow is fantastic and very easy to follow. I think it's an ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: God Makes a Deal with the Devil

    Ha! I love this. The humour is impeccable. This definitely gave me Good Omens vibes; the connection between God and Satan reflects the connection between Crowley and Aziraphale in Good ...

    Feb 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Don't Trust the Light

    Holy smokes! The detail of the horrific murder of the Vanderbilt family is horrifying. Although I agree with reviewer MissGangamash, sometimes less is more. The impact of "Do not trust ...

    Feb 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Bottled Euphoria

    Very nicely written. wow! I find the "I look up at the sky. The tree branches and its leaves block the stars, but the leaves on the tree shine brighter ...

    Feb 1, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: DUMB

    The fact that this is a true story boggles my mind. Some people choose to be ignorant about things they don't want to understand. Poor Brent I had a few ...

    Feb 1, 2021


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