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Re: Fathers-Loved By God
Fathers..... They are there to love , There to care , [delete]And[/delete] to provide . Fathers They love because God first loved , They care because they love , They ...
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Re: Things I Just Have to Say
Things I Just Have to Say - Why did you capitalize every letter? When life feels Like it's falling apart What am I supposed to do ? I can't cry ...
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Re: Black Sword
Okay so first things first there are two things the name of the project and the name for a warrior for it are two different things one means living sword. ...
Jun 6, 2011 -
Re: My Metaphor
Read from cover to cover To see what lays inside You will get a story But can you pick out truth from lies ? LIke a metaphor I am a ...
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Re: Crossing The Rubicon
When we're between an erupting earth and an exploding sky, is when the choice must be made, the sword or the glass eye? We were lost in the cacophony, being ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: [Removed]
Red - Spell/Grammar Correction | Blue - Alternative | Green - Comment Broken pendants of rain struck the grass, brown and dry, frosted over like tea cakes. We were in ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Pure and Simple
Red - Grammar/Spelling Change | Blue - Alternative "What really happened to Dad?" Fieldpaw whispered. "No cat knows ... " Infinite sadness echoed in Hawkstar's voice. "He would've been proud ...
May 9, 2011
