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*sniffles and stares at the ground* that, was so sad. You should try changing the rhyme scheme, t restricts the poem. But... good job anyways.

I think basic content is good, so im gonna go deeper. First lemme say you contradict yourself. Probably on purpose. Moving on. I disagree. We were indeed made to die. ...

You know, i just went through this, and as i went through this, i sang it. This poem is PERFECT for a song. Really. Which means dont change anything, or ...

Unique. I like it. But whats the subject??? I mean, it sounds Great. But i rally have no cle what this is about.

Wait wait wait wait what. This is a really good poem ehte. But what is it about?

These are great! Fantastic. Phenominal! But might i suggest a type of index or footnotes for definitions???

XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.

XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.

XD oh man that is too funny! Decepticon? I would have never guessed. Brilliant work, really.

Woooooooow! Might I suggest footnotes for the big words for those who are dumb like me and have no idea what they mean? ;) other than that, bravo. Well dpne

Sadness. Awe!

Pull back our sleeves. Not selves. Thats the only mistake. This poem rocks my socks!

W. O. W.

Aweeee! :/ *sniffle* I wish my life in love ended that well.

Thats what i try to do. I write a paragraph about writers block, how i feel, and yow i can overcome it. But this poem is much better than anything ...