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Wow. Interesting. The form is very unique. I don't wanna be picky about minor things, but... I have learnt. So much much from failing. That I gave up on winning. ...

"Oh, so now you tell me it was figurative." Buahahahaah XD Well, you so made me chuckle. Good thinking, though. I can't help but remember how everyone was so pissed ...

I always found Christmas break, well, boring. Maybe it's because I hate the snow, the cold, all the lights and why the hell is everyone so damned cheerful. These may ...

Good gods, I'm speechless. And I still can't feel my knees. And I didn't cry, though it was close, but apparently the language barrier kept me from tears. Good, otherwise ...

OH MY GODS. Amazing. Simply amazing. I was shivering all the time. I'm a huge fan of everything that doesn't say it all, that has unfinished thoughts and that should ...

Okay, I must admit, I chuckled several times. Buuut. That would be about that. First of all, I think you should proof-read it again, 'cause you have some minor spelling ...

Amazing. Somehow, the usage of words and the dark climate of the poem, they send a shiver down your spine. The title sounds like a name of some kind of ...

Okay, I don't get it. But I'm touched. The only explanation I can think of is that the protagonist's friend was ice/snow and they disappeared in a blizzard, but it ...

Who needs a body anyway? That was a good one :D Five minutes later, I was covered with an eerie red glow. Unnecessary details. Maybe you should try "Soon, I ...

OH MY GODS. Just 'Oh my gods'. This is incredible. So much is unsaid, yet there's so much meaning. They're touching, they're moving, they get into your mind and play ...

My general impression: I LOVE IT. I'm always astonished by any art that carries a deeper message and acrostics are just great for this. The poem's vocabulary can be confusing ...