Void14

Wow, this is really good! I like your vocab a lot, it works well. It actually sounds like you know what you are saying, unlike me. The ending is pretty ...

This might seem odd. But I don't want to do reviews at the moment to publish more chapters. So if you want to read more of my book right now, ...

This is really good. It's sorta morbid though. Has there been an experience that made you this way? You should have explained more in the poem, it still is pretty ...

This is really good. Though you should capitalize and use periods and stuff. 'like this it dont look that well'

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This is really good. Though you should capitalize and use periods and stuff. 'like this it dont look that well'

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This is really good. Though you should capitalize and use periods and stuff. 'like this it dont look that well'

actually ill let you in on a little secret ive been planning ill send you a messege about it dont tell anybody or ur dead. k?

This is all just a rough draft so everybody chill about the no paragraphs and accidintaly capitization.

I'm only 14. I've found out it's really hard for me to write, but I know I can become really good if I work smarter, not harder. Thanks for the ...

Thanks for the review! I don't want to rewrite the entire reply so look below please.

Thanks for another review! The thing is that they are all rough drafts, with the bazillion sentence paragraphs, accidentily capitalized names, etc. I will polish up the chapters after finishing ...

I planned to explain later for very good reasons. About chapter 3 or 4 when things will get very interesting. And everybody don't worry, I will explain everything in a ...

Thanks! Endorphins to the max on my first try!

Not too shabby!

Thats pretty good.