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Re: That's Hot.
Dude! This is really unique :) at first I was like "what the heck is the next taylor doing on an internet dating site" but then I got it ;) ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Love
I really liked this :) Agreed, you did use 'yet' a little much at the end, but it wasn't too much for me... I love your flow in stitching one ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Deamon
I really liked this! Very good. But I was just wondering, is the grandpa a demon then? Also I noticed this: “How’re you going today?” I think you meant: "How ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Always With Me Chapter 1 part 2
Remember to shorten your sentences, add spacing, and put what people say in ". Like: "I already told you what happened," Mary frowned. Keep up the good work, and remember ...
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: The Yawning Mouse
Like Tayla said... Some parts I thought could use a little more detail. Very good though. I rather enjoyed it. The ending was a little abrupt I thought. I was ...
Jan 7, 2010 - Re: Second Chances (Jayme's perspective) Dec 24, 2009
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Re: The day my life went wrong
Hey Forestqueen808, I love your title, first off, it's what drew me in. Secondly, I have a personal attraction to stories like this. The only thing that I didn't really ...
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: The Inure Effect
Hey Silversun :) I'm Rose, and I hope you don't mind that I post a few comments? Ok, so I liked your story idea, beautifully written. Quick question though. Is ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: The Missing!
Hey Borntoshop :) Rose here, and I really want to say that I love this piece. Short, yes, but descriptive. It's really beautiful. But I'd like to say that maybe ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: The Mirror
Hello Anima9, You have a nice piece here. A little short, but that can be fixed. The beginning sentences were a little long and confusing for me. Now I feel ...
Nov 12, 2009 -
Re: The Last Good Bye (edited:ending)
Hey Spike71294, I really liked your story. Very sweet. Just three things I wanted to comment on. First, I really didn't understand the ending. What became clear? Second, it would ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Always High Standards
Hello Tapatia, First of all, let me say that I love the atmosphere of your story. Not too dark (like mine can be :? ) and not too happy. Plus, ...
Oct 24, 2009 -
Re: The Attack
Hey Jess
Oct 20, 2009 -
Re: Speculation: F58
Hello Faia Merth, First of all let me say that your vocabulary is superb. You give the right words to describe, without making the reader feel ignorant or confused. Love ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: You're Not perfect.
Hello jessie2009, Before I begin, let me say that your story is very good. I really enjoyed reading it, so thank you for putting it up. Since I'm new here, ...
Aug 5, 2009